Charlie II

I love the fact that, when reading this, I can't make any of my usual comments. It's nice to see a writer who has both control over her narrative and ...

Flemzo -- that's just stunning... I'm so jealous of you right now! little tin fish -- It *might* be an oversized periodic table (it only just fits on my wall!) ...

An intriguing short story. I understand from your "spoiler" that you had some trouble with the formatting -- it looks pretty good to me actually, though you could probably do ...

LavenderBlue -- Great pose in the second photo! You do look very outdoorsy! :wink: And, just because everyone needs a photo with a wooden chicken:

Nick | Viridian City | Carnival Day Nick was looking for somewhere quiet to examine his leaves, but he wasn't doing a very good job of it. Stall by stall ...

Nick | Viridian City | Carnival Day Nick watched David leave with the new girl with little interest. She was tall, like him, and very colourful, like the festival. That ...

Nick | Viridian City | Carnival Day The day was bright and filled with colour as Nick wandered along Viridian City's highstreet. Stalls packed with Pokémon plushies and local delicacies ...

Name: Nick Lyell Age: 10 Gender: Male Appearance: Nick is short, even for his age, and is easily recognisable by his jacket with “The Collar”. (Indeed, among his friends, the ...

Dr. Stent -- Outside the shed The blind subject could "teleport". Seemingly at will he was able to rearrange the delicate structure of his body and transport the exact quantum ...

For anyone/everyones use: I find it quite hard to remember everyone's characters so I tend to make a spreadsheet for the storybooks I'm in. Feel free to edit anything on ...

Dr. Stent -- The Car "Stop the car." The driver did as Dr. Bishop said and the black Mercedes-Benz crawled to a halt. "Kill the engine." Again, the driver complied, ...

If you guys will have me, I'll see what I can do! Edited: 04/06/2011 -- Added brief history to character profile. ;) Is it ok if Adrian has seniority in ...

Interesting choice of a character -- a criminal who's escaping from prison. I can tell there's a lot of potential here, so let's see if we can improve this. I'm ...

My god that was creepy! :P 1. Tone/voice Natural speech is interesting. It's also very difficult to write effectively, and I think you did a very good job, but there ...

8. Penguins When I was sitting at my desk, A penguin came and made a nest, Beside my side -- oh what a pest! -- But I don't love her ...